It is often said that government spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important ? Do you agree or disagree

#government #money #projects #wildlife

Government

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The government

is pumping a large amount of their budget into wildlife

conservation where as

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conservation, whereas

conservation whereas

there are other important issues

also

. I agree to

this

as it is certainly pivotal

for

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saving our mother nature,

this

is shown in below mentioned essay.

Firstly

, many animals

are coming

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is coming

under endangered species criteria if they were not saved it will unbalance our ecosystem. For an instance,

number

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the number

of tigers in Indian forests

were taking

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took

a dip in

last years but

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the last years, but

the last years but

government

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the government

took some major steps and initiated big campaigns on the name of tiger conservation which helped in improving the count of tigers in

jungle

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the jungle

Secondly

, land encroachment is

also

one of the major issues for which

government

has to put up more money. Some people

starts

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start

are starting

have started

living in

forest

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the forest

forests

a forest

and they hunt wild animals for their food

Accept space

cut plants to make their place livable

Accept space

If they are asked to leave the place, from

government they

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the government, they

the government they

demand monetary compensation or land to survive.

Lastly

, due to

resorts

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the resorts

and tracks built in

middle

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the middle

of the jungle problems

are cropping

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is cropping

such

as tracking grouping unknowingly destroys major medicinal plants under their foot trail. At night time, they set up bonfire which

may led

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may lead

to a devastating situation if

fire

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the fire

spread all over the

forest

. To curb

such

incidents

government

made some jungles as national

forest

and deployed staff on its payroll for safeguarding of

forest

. To conclude, I do admit

government

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the government

is spending a lot on wildlife

conservational

an occurrence of improvement by virtue of preventing loss or injury or other change

conservation

projects

Accept space

but it is necessary for

sustainable future

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a sustainable future

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Grammar mistakes
 

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252 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Wildlife conservation
Biodiversity
Ecosystem
Human welfare
Poverty alleviation
Resource allocation
Cost-benefit analysis
Non-governmental organizations (NGOs)
Ecotourism
Sustainable development
Preservation
Endangered species
Habitat destruction
Climate change
Environmental stewardship

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