Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Welfare works are very
benificial
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
for the whole
society
.Some people are of the view that
voluntry
of your own free will or design; done by choice; not forced or compelled
voluntary
works for the
benifit
financial assistance in time of need
benefit
of the
society
such
as collecting a charity, improving your surroundings or sports education to younger ones should be made a
mendatory
required by rule
mandatory
part
of high
school
courses.In
this
essay we will argue why I completely disagree with
this
openion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
. It is commonly believed that
voluntry
of your own free will or design; done by choice; not forced or compelled
voluntary
services for the prosperity of community like raising funds for an organization
,
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,
teaching sports to
childs
a young person of either sex
children
child
should be considered as a compulsory component of
school
education.
This
is because it has advantages for both the children as well as the
society
.The
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
learn a sense of responsibility and how does it feel to do practical work while the
society
gets their services.
For instance
, it is my own experience that while during my medical
school
when
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
raised charity for Shoukat Khanum Memorial and Cancer Hospita,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
realized how difficult it is
to do
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doing
work in a practical field.
Therefore
,
this
type of activities helps the children and community in many different ways Having said that
,
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,
however
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
entirely disagree with
this
view that these welfare chores should be a
mendatory
required by rule
mandatory
part
of high
school
courses.Owing to the reason, that
this
type of works requires
alot
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a lot
of spare
time
,
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,
effort and energy and along with that they become meaningful when done with pure involvement and interests of students.
Furthermore high
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Furthermore, high
school
students have limited
time which
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time, which
must be utilized for the much compulsory and important
studies
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study
.
In addition
,
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,
these
sort
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sorts
of works require require a person who has enough
time
and energy and has completed all other types of works related to life.
For example
, all over the world most of the
cherities
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charts
charities
,
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,
sports teaching academies are run by people who have lived
major
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the major part
a major part
part
of
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
lives
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life
and now they are having spare
time
which they
volunterely
out of your own free will
voluntarily
want to be utilized for
benifit
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the benefit
benefit
of
community
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the community
.
Thus
, these
type
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types
of activities is the right of students themselves and should never be made a compulsory thing. To sum up
,
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,
in
this
essay we argued why some people think that welfare works for
society
should be a must
part
of
school
courses.Personally,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
strongly think that it is the decision of the child him/herself that he/she wants to be involved in them or not.
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