Some parents believe that extra private lessons outside school hours, where students work alone with a teacher, can help them do better at school. Others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Many parents believe that the crowded environment in regular classrooms can have a negative impact on the academic performance of students.

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send them to private tuitions where the

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can individually help them to study their lessons more effectively and perform better at

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.

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, others believe that private lessons outside

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hours are burdensome to children and it can have a negative influence on their academic development. Because of the constraints of

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, the size of the syllabus and the number of students,

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teachers may not be able to cater to the individual needs of all children who have different intellectual capacities.

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, in regular classrooms, weaker students find it hard to grasp the formulas of mathematics and science, which makes these subjects difficult for them. Whereas, the

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at private tuition follows the pace of the student and makes sure that he is thorough with the lessons.

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means that the

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has sufficient

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to repeat the lessons in case the student does not understand it, the

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gives greater confidence to

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students and helps them to get superior grades in examinations.

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, private lessons outside

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hours are considered, by many parents, as an intrusion into the

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that children should engage in sports or other extracurricular activities. They believe that students are already stressed out after regular

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hours and should be given

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to relax,

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of taxing them again with more lessons. If they are forced into private tuitions they may develop a negative attitude toward studies, which would have a detrimental effect on their academic performance.

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, private lessons outside

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hours are very expensive and many parents would not be able to afford it. After considering the positive and negative aspects of private tuitions, I suggest that intellectually weak students should get assistance from a private

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, who would help them to perform better in

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. But, on regular

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days, students should not be burdened with extra private lessons and the best way to do it is, to find a few hours during weekends.

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it may be financially burdensome for many parents, intellectually weak students would greatly benefit from private tuitions. In conclusion, despite certain drawbacks, private tuition has enormous benefits for students, to perform well in their academics.