Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion

There has been an upward trend in using
technology
like laptops and computers in the
education
system. There has always been an argument whether the using of
technology
in for
education
propose have a positive or negative effect. Some believe it has a positive impact, while others think it causes a counterproductive effect. I support the
first
view,
that is
, it has beneficial implications in the
education
field. In the following paragraphs, I am going to discuss both points of view. It is clear that the
computer
enhances the classroom experience by incorporating audiovisual media.
As a result
, the
student
finds the lure to learn through
this
entertainment
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entertaining
way of learning. As some research has been published in Manchester newspaper in the UK shows that pupil finds it more enjoyable and attractive to them to learn through video's which contains sounds and pictures. All
this
is achievable through computers and laptops.
further
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Further
, it allows teachers to share ideas as well as resources online using the
computer
network. Online learning is now potential with the help of the Internet and computers, which helps those who in need to learn but find it challenging to come to school due to specific resonance.
In contrast
, many disagree and believe that computers and
Technology
such
as
Internet
Suggestion
the Internet
have negative feedback on children because nowadays schoolboys spend more and more time playing video games through them that influence their
education
and the school grades.
Also
, sitting in front of a
computer
screen for an extended period may impact the health and cause some
eyes
Suggestion
eye
problem
such
as buried in vision and headache. In 2017 study done by some university
student
in Colombia that discuss the impact of
technology
in
student specialy
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student, especially
student especially
student special
student specially
laptop and computers and it shows that 30 % of the
student
have any problems due to prolonged standing in front of computers. In conclusion, I believe computers and
Technology
have many profits in the
education
system to the leaner and teachers
also
on the way of teaching which is tempting despite the fact of the health problems and the negative actions in children
that is
can be resolved all by well supervision from the parents on how to use the
computer
and
Technology
. So I encourage using
technology
more
education
suggest
Suggestion
suggests
.
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