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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion

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There has been an upward trend in using technology in the education system. Some believe it has a positive impact, while others think it causes a counterproductive effect. In the following paragraphs, I am going to discuss both points of view. It is clear that the computer enhances the classroom experience by incorporating audiovisual media.
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, the students find the lure to learn through
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 way of learning. According to a research published in the Manchester Newspaper in the UK showed that pupils find it more enjoyable and attractive to learn through videos which contain sounds and pictures.
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, it allows teachers to share ideas as well as resources online using the computer network. .
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, many disagree and believe that computers and technology
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 as
internet
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the internet
 have negative feedback on children because nowadays school boys spend more and more time playing video games that influence their education and the school grades.
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, sitting in front of a computer screen for an extended period may impact the health and cause some eye problems
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 as blurred vision and headaches. In 2017 a study done by some university students in Colombia discussed the impact of technology on students and it showed that 30 % of the them had problems due to prolonged sitting in front of computers.
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 there are valid arguments on both sides, I personally believe that the rising use of computers and artificial intelligence in education is a positive phenomenon while it
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 has negative impacts.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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