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At the present time, the population of some countries include relative large numbers of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give the reasons for your answer and include any relative examples from your own knowledge or experiences.

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The demography configuration of each country can be expressed into different
categories but
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categories, but
 the most crucial one is the population age Where we can observe
large number
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a large number
large numbers
 of young
adult
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adults
 in comparison with older people in the balance of features and disadvantages. I will explain my opinion in
this
 essay. On one hand,
relatively large number
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a relatively large number
the relatively large number
 of young
adult
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adults
has
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have
 a positive relationship with the higher gross domestic
production which
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production, which
 has affected by High number of
youth
 fulfilled by enthusiasm, faith, and power in different fields. They do their best to booster national economy. Strong armies are built by young
youth
 who insist on defending their land and the
honor
bestow honor or rewards upon
honour
 where older people has experience to support young adults in achieving missions from their leadership positions
.
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.
 On
another hand
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the other hand
other hand
,
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,
the older people need special care due to the weakness, and diseases associated
by
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with
 old age, so that elderly homes are operated by young
youth
.
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 Many countries in northern Europe operate and Canada several immigration
program
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programs
 to attract young
youth
 from skilled
labors
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labours
 and technicals to enhance their Economic cycle. Eventually, young adults and
youth
 are
predominant pillar
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predominant pillars
a predominant pillar
the predominant pillar
 of any success story in economy and community development.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic trend
  • economic development
  • workforce dynamics
  • social innovation
  • healthcare allocation
  • education and skills development
  • employment challenges
  • economic instability
  • resource management
  • aging population
  • cultural and societal shifts
  • generational conflicts
  • global competitiveness
  • progressive changes
  • technological advancements
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