Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In a contemporary
society nature
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society, nature
plays
such
a pivotal role in our lives that it has undeniably become the biggest concern of the present-day world. Human beings have greatly destroyed fragile natural system over the past years.
Today some
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Today, some
people surmise that
the
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The
loss of
species
is the main driving force behind catastrophes while others assert that there are more perplexities to take into account. In
this
essay I intend to elucidate on both sides and accept the former option to be more crucial. On the one hand it is
utmostly
important that we appreciate the significance of endangered
species
on
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in
maintaining natural balance. Ecosystem consists of delicate arrangements where all living creatures depend on each other. The disappearance of any animal or plant
species
disrupts the balance and negatively influences other plants and animals by breaking food chains and altering the habitat they live.
Such
imbalances frequency return to haunt us in unexpected ways.
Further
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Father
given is that humans are responsible for destroying their habitats, so we should exert every possible effort to save them.
On the other hand
, it is true that there is
also
a multitude of issues which pose threats to the environment,
such
as global warming, water contamination and so on.
Such
grave situations
also
merit our attentions.
However
, it is my personal belief, these perplexities may lead to inconsiderable consequences compared to the loss of
species
. By the way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that saving endangered
species
is principal. Since ecological changes constitute potential risks to us and
environment
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the environment
, it is clearly in our own interests to protect
species
which are on the verge of extinction. I can't help but envisage that
,
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,
however
, problems are by no means insurmountable, they cannot be curtailed in a short run.
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