some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language . discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The reasons for learning a foreign
language
is
debatibale
open to doubt or debate
debatable
.
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people
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People
often claim that learning another
language
is to go abroad or to get a job.
while while some
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While some
While while some
people feel that learning a foreign
language
these are not the only reasons to study a foreign
language
.
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.
How ever both
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However, both
However both
of the views will be discussed in
thes
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the s
essay
,
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,
provided with evidence as to why
leaning
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
a foreign
language
is
why
to a great degree or by a great distance; very much ('right smart' is regional in the United States)
way
more useful
then
lean
give temporarily; let have for a limited time
loan
it to travel or to work. The
first
portion of people
say
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says
that studying another
language
is only to have a higher chance of getting a job or to help you while
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
abroad.
which
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Which
means learning another
language
has a limited
uses
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use
and the uses for it is only to get a job or to help you to communicate with people in other countries. From my point of view I disagree with
this
because having the skill to speak with a
second
language
is no
didcated
devoted to a cause or ideal or purpose
dedicated
for
thiese
plural of "this"
these
those
cases only its way more useful
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
that
,
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for
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example, it
can open a whole new word of knowledge by surfing the internet or having a foreign friend which can help you to
lean
gain knowledge or skills
learn
about other people
cultcher
a particular society at a particular time and place
culture
and how to live their
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
in comparison with yours. The
second
part of people believe that learning a foreign
language
has more
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
the uses mentioned above
,
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in more
deteils
true confidential information
details
detail
they think that other languages are not for work and communication only
,
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and I completely agree with them because languages can be used in many ways
,
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,
for example
expanding the social skills by meeting friend all around the world
,
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,
besides
that you can read the books of other counties and that will help you to improve
your self
reflexive form of "you"
yourself
to
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for
the better. In
concluasion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conclusions
consolation
,
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,
people often have a
deferent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
ideas and beliefs and that depends on each person and how did he experience his
life
,
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,
may be
this
fist group of people have a
deferent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
life
experience in
life
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life, then
then
the
scond which
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second, which
second which
make
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makes
them believe that languages are for work and travel only
,
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,
while the
others
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
says it is more useful the that
.
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Ibelieve
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I believe
that foreign languages are fun and a very
stonge
being definitely out of the ordinary and unexpected; slightly odd or even a bit weird
strange
skill to have
becase
for the reason that; on account of
because
it can improve our experience in
life
by
expousering
expose or make accessible to some action or influence
exposing
to
to
being one more than one
two
other
people
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peoples'
person's
peoples
ideas
,
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,
not only that but it can
also
help us with communication and many more exciting things.
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