Kindly evaluate and share your suggestion for improvement. New stories on TV and newspaper are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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With the advanced technology and because of various new gadgets nowadays it is far easier to have a photograph of a certain incident or place.

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, more and more articles in newspapers, as well as stories on TV, were attached with pictures which play a significant part to understand the complete perspective of the

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event. In my opinion,

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visual graphics play a vital role,

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, we

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underestimate the power of words. Surely pictures make a better understanding of a certain

story

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. They did not help to visualize, but

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inform those facts which can not be explained through words.

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photographs

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the photographs

show a certain part in a precise manner.

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, a

story

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that shares information about an

accident

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of two vehicles might tell you about the number injuries and the way how the

accident

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happened but

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happened, but

only through visual effects, one can get to know about the damage done to both vehicles and

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the severity

of the

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. So,

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, the importance of pictures is undeniable.

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, words have their own place as far as news is concerned. Pictures do share noticeable information for a certain moment,

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, a complete

story

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can only be informed through words.

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, a picture cannot answer the following: How the

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happened? What happened after it? What remedies taken by the government to reduce

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accidents?

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, a plethora of questions

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remains

to answer and for that word provide

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an understanding

from beginning to end about a complete

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. To conclude, visuals surely have helped to present a broader view

similarly

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importance of words lies in its own manner. All in all, both pictures and words play an imperative role to understand a certain situation.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

287 words

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