You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The
graph
shows the tourism information office enquires
received in 2011 from January
to June
, comparing the enquires
done “in person”, “by letter/email” and “by telephone”. The graph
has a scale from 0 to 2,000 and register
how many Correct subject-verb agreement
registers
enquires
they had in each month divided by type.
Observing the graph
, we can see that enquires
“in person” raised considerably during the six-month period. On January
400 enquires
were registered and on
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in
June
, up to 2,000 enquires
were done in person, representing a 500% increase.
Enquires
by telephone also
raised approximately 160% from January
(1,000) to June
(1,600), but on the other hand
, enquires
by telephone decreased 50
%, as we can see that 800 Change preposition
by 50
enquires
were done on
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in
January
and just 400 on
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in
June
.
Analyzing the graph
, we can also
note that the total amount of enquires
increased quickly, approx. 2,000 enquires
were done on
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in
January
against 4,000 enquires
done on
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in
June
and that on February the three enquire types had a very similar demand, approx. 600 “in person”, 700 “by letter/e-mail” and 800 “by telephone”, and from March onwards they started to increase or decrease as reported above.Submitted by natalia.orfali on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, enquires, january, june, “by with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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