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Some people believe bicycle has lot of advantages whereas others believe bicycle has more disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, bicycles market trends as increased in terms of cost and usage. Some sections of people feel that the
bicycle
 has more advantages and
on the other hand
, some think it has more disadvantages.
This
 essay will discuss why
bicycle
 has drawbacks and provide my opinion that
cycle
 benefits outweigh the drawbacks. The prime disadvantage of pedal cycles is that it cannot be used as a faster mode of transport. In our daily life we stay at a place which is some miles away from our work. Ultimately, we cannot rely on a
bicycle
 for reaching out to daily office work. If we go by
cycle
, there is a more probability that, we may miss our deadlines.
As a result
, people prefer a faster mode of
transports transport
Suggestion
transport, transport
transport transport
 like public buses, trains or their own bike, car.
However
,
cycle
 has the potential to increase our health benefits. So, bicycles can be used for our weekly purposes like bringing vegetables from market, groceries from departmental stores. As a consequence, we exercise our body and people's fitness levels level increases.
For example
, a study conducted by the Cambridge University between two groups of families who use pedal
cycle
 versus motorbikes stated that, the families who used
cycle
 were ten percent healthier than the families who used motorbikes.
As a result
,
cycle
 increases people’s health.
Secondly
, it is non-hazardous to the environment. As bicycles don't emit any harmful gases like other vehicles does do by using fuel or gas, it is more nature friendly.
For instance
, a survey published by New York Times in the region of Thailand showed that by using bicycles in the years between 2015-2018 reduced air pollution and increased the percentage of healthy air quality by two percent. In conclusion,
this
 essay discussed both the disadvantage and the advantages of
bicycle
 and provided my opinion that
advantages
Suggestion
the advantages
 outweigh the disadvantages.
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