Some people claim that not enough of waste from homes is recycled. They say that only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal recourse requirement To to what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their products.

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Recycling is considered to be a necessity, for reducing waste generated by ever increasing population.

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, many advocates that, in order to ensure recycling at every level, it should be made a compulsion under

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making there are other ways to promote reusability of garbage as discussed in

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legalizing recycling will force people to follow it under threat of

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. It is evident from many surveys that

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once rules are enacted and declared compulsory under people are more likely to follow

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declares guidelines stating mandatory penalising for non adherence to recycling guidelines

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will compel more people to play

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the process

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, results will be better when every individual takes personal accountability

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, legalisation will act as a catalyst in increasing waste product's

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reusability

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, programs promoting reusability of waste material can

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. Either government alone or with

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the help

of other organisations should design programs to encourage people towards a clean society. Sweden

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, is a country where government has taken an initiative under which every resident get some credit point for every trash of can or bottle they put for recycling

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makes people to enjoy recycling as it brings them personal benefits.

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legalization will compel more people to participate in

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the recycling process

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encouraging people to take

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the creation

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