“Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?”

The number of crimes is soaring in many regions of the world, albeit many efforts of the society. What is worse, there is a significant growth in trend of ex-prisoners who will commit misconduct again after their

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imprisonment experience.

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essay will discuss some attributes to

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dangerous trend before figuring out any feasible solution to it.

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a host of reasons why these people

reoffend

cause to feel resentment or indignation

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once released. The main attribute is their incompetence in finding a decent job, since criminals are often lack of necessary life skills, ample education or

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vocational

training to meet requirements of employees. Even if they were well-trained before imprisonment, implementation of these knowledge and skills could be challenging. To clarify, an engineer, who once mastered the art of creating

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furniture, may be possibly unable to make a wooden chair after a 10- year sentence. As a consequence, they have no other options than involving in theft,

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burglary, or

more serious crimes to make ends meet.

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, ex-criminals are often regarded as unsuitable candidates in interviews as most employers only prefer those who have a decent background.

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, with certain attempts, there is a high possibility to diminish

reoffenders

a person who transgresses moral or civil law

offenders

. An advisable solution is that the government plan more carefully about the education for

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criminals.

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will ensure they can find a career afterwards to support their life and

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, benefit to the socioeconomic. That means, if they can find

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the money

themselves, their family or the government will no longer have to support them. In Korea,

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, vocational training schools were opened to reform prisoners across the country. In these special schools, they receive moral lessons, up-to-date knowledge about high-demand majors

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as agriculture or technology.

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,

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only has the lowest rate of

reoffenders

a person who transgresses moral or civil law

offenders

in Asia, but

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the one to spend the least on recapturing ex-crimes. In conclusion, there are numerous reason for the increase in the amount of crimes’ misconducts after their release, namely due to these people’s inability to find appropriate jobs. One of effective ways to control

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rate is the government’s effort in reforming the rehabilitation of them by a provision of proper education.