Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

We live in a world where criminal activities have started becoming the new norm. In recent years, the law around the world had
hard time
a hard time
managing the peace and harmony. While some people blame the technology and the economy
growth which
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growth, which
brings enough tools for the culprit to do the deed, others believe factors like the drastic difference between social and financial status of people, are to blame. I believe causes like lack of acceptance in terms of different race, ethnicity, culture and religion could make matters worse. One of the major reason is, people are hesitant to accept others who are different
themselves. The
doubt about the truth of something
prevails in
an environment
For instance
, the
a native or inhabitant of Africa
of or relating to the United States of America or its people or language or culture
community is always
a reference point to shoot at
and prejudiced against here in the united states.
constant criticism and being looked down upon by others, actually provokes criminal
manner of acting or controlling yourself
in teenagers, who are forming their opinion about the society at that age. Their mental state gets disturbed, and
as a result
, they turn to criminal activities like theft, abduction, scams etc.
, there are many remedies available that can help improve the situation.
For example
, giving the proper education to children of all
a strong belief in a supernatural power or powers that control human destiny
, nationality etc., could be a great starting point. Learning to differentiate between the right and the wrong is an important ability and the education system can help cultivate it. An educated person can form their own opinion about matters and can make a good living for themselves.
gives the sense of accomplishment and satisfaction, which stops their mind to be tempted to do anything
that is
or dangerous to the society. In summary, even though the crime rate has skyrocketed recently, it is still possible to combat the situation by resolving the issues that form the basis of
manner of acting or controlling yourself
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
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