More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Delayed childbirth is a trend
that is
becoming increasingly popular. A lot of people are beginning to have children later in Linking Words
life
than what was previously obtainable. Use synonyms
Yhr major reason
behind Suggestion
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Yr major reason
this
is the fact that people have become more career driven and would like to excel outside of parental duties. There are many drawbacks to Linking Words
this
recent development, Linking Words
however
, there is one huge benefit (Linking Words
fufillment
), that makes the decision very tenable. a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
Hence
, the advantages are far greater than the negatives.
Nowadays, people are raised with the ideology that there is more to Linking Words
life
than being a parent, Use synonyms
therefore
a lot of individuals put off Linking Words
giving birth to later
in Suggestion
giving birth later
life
as opposed to the habit of the previous generation. Use synonyms
Women
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Women, in
in particular
, are more ambitious than ever and strive to have accomplishments outside the home. Linking Words
In addition
, men are Linking Words
also
not left in the Linking Words
backseat
, as they Suggestion
back seat
also
aspire to generate enough wealth to cater Linking Words
from
themselves and their families. Suggestion
for
For instance
, a survey carried out by the fertility clinic Linking Words
in
Harvard, in July 2016, revealed that about 80% of people have decided to start bearing children in their late thirties, so that they can focus on their careers and dreams.
The majority of people that give birth later in Suggestion
at
life
have the advantage of career advancements, as well as being emotionally, psychologically, financially Use synonyms
amd
physically in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
stabel
enough to raise children. resistant to change of position or condition
stable
Although
, there are studies that show that fertility decreases with age and people should not put it off till later, so as to avoid medical problems. Linking Words
However
, it is safe to say that the preparedness to cater for children outweighs any other disadvantage that can be thought of. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the long wait allows for development in all ramifications and Linking Words
fufilment
in all aspects of their lives. a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
For example
, from personal experience, my mother used to say that the fact that she had us later in Linking Words
life
, after all her accomplishments made her more relaxed and Use synonyms
fufilled
when she started raising us. She never felt inferior or had any cause to regret. Looking back, she always thought it was the best decision of her completed to perfection
fulfilled
life
as she did not have to wait on any man.
In conclusion, more and more males and females of Use synonyms
this
present Linking Words
generation are
deciding to have children in their later age. Accept comma addition
generation, are
This
recent development can be attributed to the increasing interest in career accomplishments. The joys of a fufilled Linking Words
life
outside parental activities remains a huge benefit despite the various disadvantages of giving birth late, so Use synonyms
therefore
, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...