The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.

The bar chart illustrates information about the
amount
of people who visited three main airports in
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New
york
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York
city in
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city, in
a period of six years from 1995 to 2000.
First
of all.The
number
of
passenger
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passengers
has increased
by
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with
the years.In 1995, LaGuardia
airport
has the largest
number
of visitors nearly 35
million
.While
Newark
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the Newark airport
airport
has the lowest
amount
of travellers
with
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to
slightly over than 10 millions.In 1997, John F. Kennedy
airport
has just less than 50
millions
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million
passenger followed by LaGuardia
airport
slightly ahead Newark
airport
with
approimately
(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct
approximately
4
millions
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million
travellers.The
number
of LaGuardia
airport
passengers. In 2000, was the highest
nubmer
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number
during the whole six years almost 70
million
.
Both of John
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Both John
F. Kennedy
airport
and Newark
airport
had a similar
amount
of visitor in 2000, around 40
million
more or less. In conclusion. According to the chart, Newark
airport
had the lowest
number
of visitors during the
years even
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years, even
though the
amount
has improved from almost 20
million
in 1995 to over than 40
million
in 2000.
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