The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries.

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tables
illustrates
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illustrate
data about the outcomes of selling Fairtrade*-labelled
tea
and Pineapples in five different European countries (France
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Austria
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Germany
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Netherland
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Norway) in 2010 and 2015
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measured by Euros. Overall, France had by far the highest rate in selling Fairtrade labelled
tea
in total.
while
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While
,
austria
a mountainous republic in central Europe; under the Habsburgs (1278-1918) Austria maintained control of the Holy Roman Empire and was a leader in European politics until the 19th century
Austria
was significantly ahead in pineapples sales.
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The
least amount of sales was in Norway
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(
Fairtrade labelled
tea
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and Germany
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pineapples). In terms of Fairtrade labelled
tea
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In 2010, Austria was the
first
in selling
this
product 4 million euros
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Which, is twice as many sales as Netherland.A slight
differance
the quality of being unlike or dissimilar
difference
differences
had been found between France and Germany
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in
Gremany
a republic in central Europe; split into East Germany and West Germany after World War II and reunited in 1990
Germany
slightly forward just less than 500,000.
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In
2015, France had the lead with 21 million Euros. While other countries had a gradual increase in sales.
On the other hand
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Austria had in impressive progress in pineapples sales the rate has dramatically increased in 2015, than it was in 2010 (48 and 16 respectively).
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In
2015, most of the countries
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have
a steady growth in sales of pineapples
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except
export
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, Germany and Norway. In conclusion.While other countries had
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risen there
rose their
rose their their
sales in 2015
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examine and note the similarities or differences of
compared
to that in 2010 in both products. Germany and Norway data showed a
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