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Now a days some people think that libraries are not necessary, while other disagree. Both views and give your own opinion and example.

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Libraries have been
source
Suggestion
a source
 of information and entertainment for years. With easy access to electronic books over
internet many
Suggestion
the internet, many
the internet many
 open that public libraries are no longer required,
however
 many other contradict stating the essential. Both the views are discussed in enjoying paragraph along with personal opinion.
To begin
 with, public libraries are generally centrally placed, getting to them requires commuting to their place of location. People find it difficult, as with internet
,
Accept space
,
 study material of any type
such
 as
text books
according to or characteristic of a casebook or textbook; typical
textbooks
, novels are easily available online, sitting at their own place.
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
, libraries are open for specific hours a day
,
Accept space
,
limiting their access
.
Accept space
.
More over
in addition
Moreover
,
Accept space
,
searching for books on long shelves of library hall is
tedious task
Suggestion
a tedious task
,
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,
requires referring to
number
Suggestion
the number
a number
 of indexes to search a required book.
Hence
, aforementioned
off
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
 putting factors are responsible for decrease in popularity of public libraries, making
there
of them or themselves
their
 future need doubtful.
However
,
Accept space
,
 libraries have always been famous among individuals seeking
peaceful and isolated environment
Suggestion
a peaceful and isolated environment
 for study
.
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.
 With so many
destructions
mental turmoil
distractions
 at home people generally find it difficult to focus at their dwellings; for both knowledge seeks and bibliophiles no place is better than
library
Suggestion
the library
.
In addition
 to
this
, government managed libraries are
free source
Suggestion
a free source
 of knowledge for many
educatees
someone who educates young people
educators
. In developing countries
such
 as Bangladesh,
India where
Accept comma addition
India, where
 where internet accessibility and penetration is minimal, public libraries are
must
Suggestion
musts
.
In addition
 to
this
, libraries hold authenticated study materials, with leisure of books holding historical and contemporary references.
Thus
, it is evident that libraries are important components of social infrastructure. To conclude, in my opinion libraries
are
Suggestion
is
essential requirement
Suggestion
an essential requirement
 of any society, the books they contain hold literary and historical treasures.
Also
,
there
of them or themselves
their
 presence comforts the life of persons seeking knowledge, along with those part taking
book reading
Suggestion
a book reading
 as a hobby.
Thus
,
need
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the need
 for government managed libraries
is
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are
 unquestionable.
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