Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#country #language

It is claimed that migrating to a country where speaking a foreign

language

is compulsory can lead to serious social issues and

practice

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practical

issues. While I accept that these problems might

happened

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happen

, I strongly believed that they are not worth

cancerring

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cancer ring

if you are fluent in speaking

foreign

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a foreign language

foreign languages

language

. People with poor

language

skill are

ones

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the ones

who likely have to face with these troubles. In fact, they may be unable to make a successful conservation with other people.

This

problem may be even worse if they are communicating with native speakers who may use uncommon vocabulary and slangs.

In addition

, awkward communication might have a bad effect on other aspects of life

such

as friendship, work. Unless you have a solution to solve those, it is going to lead to depression and isolation.

Nevertheless

, these troubles can easily be solved in

short amount

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a short amount

of time with a good ability in learning a new

language

. Obviously, misunderstanding in complicated conversation might

occurs but

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occur, but

occur but

it is just

short-term issue

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a short-term issue

for people with good

language

skill. By practicing, they might be able to fully understand what other people say and

subconciously

from the subconscious mind

subconsciously

reply as how native speaks

in the direction of

Moreover

a comprehensive conservation or

chasting

object formed by a mold

casting

naturally with friends and colleagues can strengthen a person’s relationship,

thus

, make his or her life more enjoyable. Even though it is true that having to speak a different

language

when living far from home country can be a cause to some social as well as practical problem. These troubles can be eliminated effortlessly with a good

language

skill.

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