IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 4.5

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#country #language
It is claimed that migrating to a country where speaking a foreign
language
 is compulsory can lead to serious social issues and
practice
Suggestion
practical
 issues. While I accept that these problems might
happened
Suggestion
happen
, I strongly believed that they are not worth
cancerring
Suggestion
cancer ring
 if you are fluent in speaking
foreign
Suggestion
a foreign language
foreign languages
language
. People with poor
language
 skill are
ones
Suggestion
the ones
 who likely have to face with these troubles. In fact, they may be unable to make a successful conservation with other people.
This
 problem may be even worse if they are communicating with native speakers who may use uncommon vocabulary and slangs.
In addition
, awkward communication might have a bad effect on other aspects of life
such
 as friendship, work. Unless you have a solution to solve those, it is going to lead to depression and isolation.
Nevertheless
, these troubles can easily be solved in
short amount
Suggestion
a short amount
 of time with a good ability in learning a new
language
. Obviously, misunderstanding in complicated conversation might
occurs but
Suggestion
occur, but
occur but
 it is just
short-term issue
Suggestion
a short-term issue
 for people with good
language
 skill. By practicing, they might be able to fully understand what other people say and
subconciously
from the subconscious mind
subconsciously
 reply as how native speaks
do
in the direction of
to
.
Moreover
 a comprehensive conservation or
chasting
object formed by a mold
casting
 naturally with friends and colleagues can strengthen a person’s relationship,
thus
, make his or her life more enjoyable. Even though it is true that having to speak a different
language
 when living far from home country can be a cause to some social as well as practical problem. These troubles can be eliminated effortlessly with a good
language
 skill.
Submitted by Thanh on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
What to do next:
Look at other essays: