Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development?

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Globalization
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means interaction and integration among people, companies, and governments worldwide.
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few decades,
such
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inter country relationships has increased a lot, some people believe that it is not advantageous to us.
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, I believe that, to a great extent, it is a positive
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. There are various examples that
proves
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prove
that
globalization
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is a positive
development
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with,
Globalization
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has increased the job opportunities for young generations. If we compare the employment rate of our grandparent’s time to today’s globalized society, it must be hundred percent better. Multinational companies give us the opportunity to navigate different countries around the globe. Nowadays, it is very common to see people settle abroad for their office work or to complete a project, which could not be possible in the absence of
globalization
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This, further
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, helps in understanding the culture of different countries.
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, foreigners working in
USA
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the USA
must be aware that Christmas and Halloween are the famous festival of US citizens and
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outsiders who work in India knows that Diwali is the national festival of the country.
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impacts that proves that
globalization
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has a positive impact towards
development
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is that it increases nation's economy. If there is no boundary barriers, international companies set up their business in multiple countries, it would not only increase the job scope for the people of host
countries but
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countries, but
also
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the profit of those companies would definitely add to
country’s gross income
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the country’s gross income
.
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it helps in the
development
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of countries.
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, the famous Japanese mobile company had recently launched its division in India,
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it will benefit India right from construction till it starts earning revenue. In conclusion, I do not see any negative impacts of
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, it is a win-win situation for the companies as well as countries. As discussed earlier,
globalization
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does not only expand
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has not only expanded
is not only expanding
the employment
opportunities but
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opportunities, but
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makes it possible to share our culture and traditions. Along with that, it contributes a lot towards country
development
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. In
short to
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short, to
a large extent,
globalization
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is a positive
development
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