Nowadays parents give more freedom to their children as compared to past. It is a positive or negative development? Give reasons and relevant examples.

In

this

present era, majorities of guardians make fewer restrictions as compared to

old days

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the old days

and give more exception to their offspring to explore different things and to take a

decision

on its own.

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On

the one

hand allowing

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hand, allowing

their kids to make choices helps them to develop

decision

-making skills and boost their self-confidence that leads to successful Life,

on the other hand

, permits their children with excess freedom might cause some threat to both. Despite some negatives, I ponder that outcomes are more positive than drawbacks. To embark with,

firstly

, parents give authority to their kids to make a

decision

on their career perspective.

This

means adolescents are free to choose the stream in the field of education as well as in a profession according to their own interest, whereas in

past

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the past

, parents do not allow their children to choose any profession and pressurise their offspring to select subjects and job according to them.

consequently

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Consequently

, having the right to make their choice helps them to enhance their skills on

decision

making as per their own view and tackle the situation according to them

also

helps them in future.

Secondly

, having liberty along with doing things on its own and making choice in life allows them to broaden their experience and boost their self-confidence drastically.

This

may lead to a successful profession and increase the joy of happiness in their life because by doing things

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in

its own interest will broaden their horizon and helps them to become more independent

.

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For instance

, a survey conducted by Cambridge University found that 80% of international students who decide to study abroad are more successful in achieving their goals and less dependent on their parents.

On the other hand

, allowing children to make a

decision

might cause some serious problem for parents and children.

This

is illustrated by the fact that these days youngsters are free to make friends and follow the fashion trends and

this

may be the reason

to

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for

adapting bad habits from other and for following latest trends they spend

excessive amount

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an excessive amount

excessive amounts

of money to show off in a friend circle.

This

is happening because they do not know the difference between right and wrong in

this

age

.

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.

hence

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Hence

, they need proper guidance and support from their parents in every stage of life. To put it succinctly,

although

there are some negatives of

this

approach, I believe that

learning

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learning, decision

decision

making skills and enhance the experience of making choice are more beneficial for youngsters to become more independent and successful.