Large shopping malls are replacing the small shops. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

With the increase in

demands

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demand

of population, number of shopping malls are

also

increasing at

fast pace

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a fast pace

.

However

,

this

has a negative impact on local shops and many of these are being replaced by the malls. From my persuasive, malls affect local markets and the ensuring essay will discuss and elucidate about

this

certain issue.

To begin

with, shopping complexes are considered to be

curse

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cursed

for small shops as the mitigate their businesses. These days people prefer to do their shopping from supermarkets because they found it easy to accumulate desirable things under

one

roof. Needless to say, growing malls

is

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are

one

of the most evident

way

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ways

for declining

marketing

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markets

market

of local shopkeepers.

Moreover

,

this

plural of "this"

these

malls attract buyers by giving

discount

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discounts

on items which directly influences the business of small shops. Markets at local level, are facing many difficulties as

majority

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the majority

of

masses

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the masses

are diverted towards them for purchasing things from groceries to clothes which means lets profit owners of small shops.

In addition

, people often buy unnecessary products and waste their savings by paying

handsome price

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a handsome price

of

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for

them. They get blind on viewing diversity of brands for

one

particular product and ends with buying expensive

one

as they believe that they are better than those available shops.

Furthermore

, malls are

also

responsible for losing culture and the reason behind

this

is that there are certain items only accessible at

local level

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a local level

the local level

and many times ignored by purchasers.

Hence

, malls are evolving the small shops. In conclusion, I recapitulate that

major cause

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a major cause

the major cause

of decreasing local markets is enormous shopping malls which are not only affecting the shopkeepers but

also

has a major contribution in sweeping away the tradition.