some people who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.

Nowadays, it has commonly viewed by many that prisoners become a good citizen when they evacuate from prison.
many
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Many
people believe that they are
the great
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the greatest
people to guide
adolescent group
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the adolescent group
about the threats of committing crimes and I partially agree with them. To some extent, the prisoners could bring awareness among
young generation
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the young generation
very nicely as they had experienced the torturous life of prison themselves.
they
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They
have guilt for the crimes they committed in
past
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the past
.
For example
, In India, a renowned NGO ‘Save Your Child’ is owned by past
prisoner
who committed robbery at his young age.
he
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He
served the jail for seven years and that period had left
noteworthy impression
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a noteworthy impression
on his mind, now he is the role model for many as he saved them from committing crimes.
However
, I think the
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
of a person hardly changes, once a thief will always be a thief, so a
prisoner
is not always a right choice to direct the adolescent people.
Also there
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Also, there
are many other individuals in our society
such
as priests, social leaders who can restrain us to do something bad by offering motivational lectures and sharing their life experiences. In conclusion, I partially agree that a past
prisoner
could improve the society by restricting teenagers from committing crimes.
it
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It
is really appreciable, If the person learns from his past mistakes.
however
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However
, a
prisoner
who learned lessons in jail is not always a right person to correct the youngster.
there
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There
are many other famous faces of society
such
as Teachers, parents, priest who can encourage the child for doing positive deeds
instead
of committing crimes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prisoners
  • rehabilitation
  • recidivism
  • consequences
  • insights
  • deterrent
  • guidance
  • support
  • role models
  • positive change
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