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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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Pollution is one of the major menaces of the world today. Despite global awareness about the ill-effects of non-degradable
waste
 generation, the amount of
garbage
 generated is on a rising spree. We are producing more and more rubbish and mass production can be considered as the major cause of it. Business & FMCG conglomerates are generating tons of
waste
 everyday owing to their heavy use of plastic and other hazardous materials like dyes, chemicals etc. They are
also
 responsible for dumping pollutants into the ocean and environment. As the mass produced goods reach
market
Suggestion
the market
, consumers
also
 dump their post consumption
waste
 in a non-eco-friendly way.
For instance
, in several developing countries individuals are observed throwing plastic cans, bottles, empty food packets in public places like railway tracks, roads and parks rather than properly disposing the same in
waste
 bins.
This
 leads to multiplication of rubbish created. Another additional reason of increasing
waste
 is lack of effective
waste
 management systems.
Garbage
 is not appropriately disposed or recycled in several countries. In many underdeveloped nations, the
garbage
 is burned, which leads to
further
 air pollution. Governments must ensure effective
waste
 disposal by creating public rules of dumping
garbage
 and enforcing the same
stringently
Suggestion
stringent
. Progressed nations must
also
 share technologies of
garbage
 disposal with counterparts and other progressing nations. Central bodies like WHO must oversee
such
co-operative
involving the joint activity of two or more
cooperative
 measures to ensure good health and clean environment for all global citizens. Countries must
also
 encourage residents to reduce unnecessary
waste
, reuse as much as possible and recycle whenever possible.
For example
, in India electronic spare parts are reused and recycled to generate income by some communities. These measures will aid in reducing global
waste
. United measures and individual efforts will foster
waste
 management and will facilitate a clean and green tomorrow for all.
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