Some people think that it is parents who are responsible for teaching children to be a good member of society. However, some people believe that it is the responsibility of schools and teachers. Who's responsibility do you believe it is?

The
gaurdians
a person who cares for persons or property
guardians
of the children are responsible, along with the teachers, for teaching them to be a good
person but
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person, but
they play a major role in doing so, as they are the closest persons to the kids. The teachers play a minor role in
this
aspect, as their job is to make the children more skilled academically. In
this
essay, the responsibility of parents to inculcate good values
to
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in
their children will be discussed. Parents are the ones who can majorly impact the lives of their kids. The reason for
this
is that, most of the kids spend
majority
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the majority
a majority
of their time with their families and so, they can discuss with the young ones, in their free time, teaching kids about how to behave well and essentially be a good person by spending some quality time
.
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Moreover
, the children
learnt
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learned
their basic skills of how to walk, speak, eat and so on, and
therefore
the parents should
also
be good persons, so that they
can be serve
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can serve
as examples for their kids.
For instance
, parents can take their children to an orphanage and donate some clothes or food and ask their
chilren
a young person of either sex
children
to do the same
,
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,
then
later on
explain
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to explain
explaining
why what they just did was a good deed and why it is important to do
such
actions. Teachers
on the other hand
, are needed to teach the children about topics that are related to academics, as
that is
their job.
Thus
, they can't really do much about teaching kids on how to be a good member of society. But to an extent, they can discipline them and teach them some good manners and how to conduct themselves in school or in general too.
Furthermore
, for the young ones to learn
on
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about
how to be a good human
bieng
the state or fact of existing
being
, having intimate one-to-one talks is the most effective way, which is not possible for the teachers to do, as the number of the students, that would attend a school, is quite large. In conclusion, parents are responsible to a large extent, to teach their kids on how to be a good person and a good member of society, as they are most probably the closest ones to them, especially at a very young age. Teachers
too play
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play
to play
a role, though it's minor, in helping the child to be a better
themself
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
.
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