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The rote learning of information by memorisation plays the most important role in educating people. do you agree with this opinion?

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Educating people involves improving their
ability
 to think, learn and to memorize certain
information
 and data. Though memorization of
information
 by
rote
 learning is important, it isn't the most crucial part of education as learning by
this
 method solely does not help much to solve problems. In
this
 essay, the importance of memorizing
information
 and why it isn't the most important part of education will be discussed. The
rote
 learning of
information
 is important as it can be recalled instantly.
It's
Suggestion
Its
 use is major
for
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in
 subjects where it mainly contains
information
that is
 to be remembered,
for
example subjects
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example, subjects
 like biology, but even for subjects where problems are needed to be solved, like mathematics and physics, memorising is quite important part of learning as it helps in remembering the basic facts and formulas.
For instance
, if a
person
 is given a question to which he needs to arrive at an answer, the formulas needed to solve it should be recalled by him or
her as, they
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her, as they
can not
can not
cannot
 be derived because it would be a waste of time.
Moreover
, the
ability
 to memorize can
also
 be considered as a measure of the capacity of our minds. On
contrary
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the contrary
, the
rote
 learning can help solve problems only to certain extent as remembering the formulas and basic facts alone
can not
can not
cannot
 make a
person
 to arrive at the answer, but
instead
, the
ability
 to think certainly helps the
person
 to think of various ways to solve it. In conclusion, the
rote
 learning and memorisation of
information
 or data
definatly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
 plays an important role in
education but
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education, but
 it is only one of the characteristics required, which are the
ability
 to think, to learn and memorize, which play equally important roles to consider someone as
competant
properly or sufficiently qualified or capable or efficient
competent
 and an educated
person
.
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