Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It has been a common concept that becoming a celebrity goes hand in hand
in
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with
living a public life. Though, some think that it is perfectly fine for
paparazzi
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the paparazzi
to take photos of celebrities, others still believe that celebrities
also
deserve some privacy too - and I
personally belongs
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personally belong
to the latter. It is true that every eye is on you when you are a celebrity. Everywhere you go, there will always be some cameras pointing at you capturing every
movements
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movement
. Invading privacy can be very frustrating and can cause major stress as you know people are watching your every step. Consider those celebrities suffering from
anorexa
a prolonged disorder of eating due to loss of appetite
anorexia
as an example, they are very conscious about the figure, as people will start to make harsh comment when they notice that they slightly gain weight. Another example is when they are on vacation,
instead
of having a relaxed
time
they are still trying to cover up so people will not
recognized
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recognize
them. Celebrities are becoming paranoid because in their mind they know that someone is looking at them.
On the contrary
, there are still people who value respect. Everyone wants
a lone
without any others being included or involved
alone
time
to enjoy their own company away from the toxic environment. Fame is what celebrity gained from outstanding performances on screen and
there
of them or themselves
their
job ends there. Off screen, they are
also
like normal employees wanting to rest after a tiring work. Celebrities
also
wants
freedom
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the freedom
to do what they want without being judged.
For instance
, some celebrities like Emma Stone, who opt to continue her studies while in
showbusiness
enrolled in a university like common student.
Also
, those celebrities who wanted to do drive around even if they get stuck
on
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in
traffic. Celebrities, most of the
time
,
also
wanted to be just like everyone of us. In summary, I strongly believe that celebrities' job is to provide entertainment on
camera but
Accept comma addition
camera, but
when the show is over they
also
need some
time
away from other form of camera. Paparazzi need to learn the to value and respect celebrities' personal space.
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