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Some people think that handwriting has no value in today’s digital world. Others however, have a contrasting view. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Communication plays
important role
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an important role
, people
uses
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use
 different mode of it, and
writing
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written
 communication is the traditional approach from past many decades. While some people believe that in
modern era
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the modern era
a modern era
, importance of handwriting become obsolete, other still
favors
promote over another
favours
 its criticality.
This
easy
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easement
 will discuss why quality of
hand
 written messages have its
benefits but
Accept comma addition
benefits, but
 why digital modes of the
information
 exchange are ultimately superior. To embark on, the
hand
 written
way
 of passing
information
 is one the traditional, old, and easy mode;
however
information
 should be clear. To use
this
 method, users do not require any kind of knowledge of the modern equipments, and could deliver the correct
information
, if
user
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the user
 has good handwriting, the improper handwriting could cause the misleading
information
.
For example
, if
message
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a message
the message
 is written in a dirty
way
 and reader is not able to read most of the message because of bad handwriting, it would result in wrong
information
 exchange. In short, handwriting plays a crucial role for a
success
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successful
 delivery of intended particulars.
However
, in today's modern world, due to technological advancements, there are
plethora
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a plethora
 of easy and affordable means of the same, which does require the handwritten piece of
information
, and it became completely obsolete.
For instance
, these days people do not require data in a piece of paper, they are more comfortable on digital modes like email, word documents, and voice bases messaging. Clearly, the digital era made the traditional
way
value less
of no value
valueless
. In conclusion, with the advance mode of communication,
hand
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the hand
 writing value is being challenged.
This
 essay discussed why some people prefer the
hand written
written by hand
handwritten
 documents and messages, In my opinion, modern era
does not requires
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does not require
 written communication as many other easy
way
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ways
 available.
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