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It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#internet #communication #people #place #information
The
internet
 has become part of the
norms
Suggestion
norm
 of society, with many people having easy access via their smartphones or laptops or whatever technological marvels they have in their possession. They use it to keep up with the latest news, communicate with their
familiars
a social unit living together
families
 who live abroad, learn something new and so forth. In my opinion, these are all testimonies as to how the
internet
 has benefited us and society as a whole. There are a great many sites at which one can find genuine and useful information.
For instance
, news websites are reliable digital repositories of recent happenings around the globe.
Nevertheless
, one should be cautious towards information obtained from the
internet
 as there are many unreliable websites containing fallacious information
such
 as tabloids and social media websites. Owing to the prevalence of
internet
 usage nowadays, the
internet
 has
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