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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encourage. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather that compete become more useful adults. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

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While some adults believe that
competition
 is an important value to be taught to their children, some prefer to emphasize cooperation more than
competition
. In my personal opinion, I believe that it is much better to instill cooperation rather than
competition
. There has always been
competition
 in many aspects of
life
Suggestion
life, thus it
thus
, it is better to have it introduce to children at a young age.
For example
, during school
sportfest
 the children are divided into different teams and they have to compete against each other in a game in order to win. Through
this
, they will learn how to compete against one another in a fun and enjoyable way. Another example is in a class, students strive hard to be in the
first
honor
bestow honor or rewards upon
honour
. They will study hard to achieve a higher grade so that they can
ranked
Suggestion
rank
 as the best student in class.
This
 has been the early ways of how
competition
 was introduced to children. On the other, there are other people who believe that children need to learn how to be cooperative in order to be a better person. A person who knows how to cooperate can a good contributor to a team in order to succeed.
For instance
, children who were taught to be in a group and work as a group became more considerate of other people. At a young age, they are exposed in
team
Suggestion
teams
a team
 where they learn to respect other people. They become more sensible and appreciative. Children who
knows
Suggestion
know
 how to cooperate, take part of success and acknowledge that it was not only him but always the team. In a brief, I do believe that teaching the children to compete has some good and bad effects.
However
, when a child is taught to
cooperative
Suggestion
cooperate
, his sense of
achivement
the action of accomplishing something
achievement
 is more fulfilling than a child who competes.
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