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Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books

#contrast #books
There's no doubt that
knowledge
 has long played a crucial role in our daily lives. Unlike previous generations, there
are
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is
wider
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the wide
 array of options related to source of
knowledge
, typical of which are traditional books and practical experiences. Before
pesenting
give an exhibition of to an interested audience
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a writer's idea
writer's idea
writer's ideas
the writer's idea
, the following essay will compare and contrast about
knowledge
 gained from paperwork and real
life
. More specifically, when it comes to similarities between two types of
knowledge
, the most outstanding point is its collaborative nature. It is apparent that with various
sourrces
the place where something begins, where it springs into being
sources
, our
knowledge
 can be broadened and perfected by abstract theoretical viewpoint from
visible material
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the visible material
 together with chances for applying what we have read into real work. Economy books,
for instance
, present myriad of definitions as well as pieces of advice,
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startup, then
then
 bring those into
life
 and figure out which is suitable
with
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to
 them the most.
On the other hand
 the uniqueness can be considered as major differences between
knowledge
 gained from
coppies
a reproduction of a written record (e.g. of a legal or school record)
copies
 and practical methods. Paper material
not only contain
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doesn't only contain
general thing
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general things
 from past
generations but
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generations, but
also
 can be absorbed by by tons of people.
Experience
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The experience
,
however
, is one-of-a-kind learning curve due to the fact that each individual solves same problems differently based on their choices.
Therefore
, learning
pratically
almost; nearly
practically
 is opportunities for exposing and gaining our own unique understanding better than conventional ways From my perspective, I prefer both types of
knowledge
. To be more particular, I might
comebine
have or possess in combination
combine
 abstract matters in
books
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the books
 with my own experience learnt from
life
 to increase the effectiveness of my task.
Moreover
, books and hands-on experience are
great combination
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a great combination
 when dealing with difficult matters In a nutshell,
although
knowledge
from
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of
 paper material and real
life
 have the disparity related to the uniqueness, there is still a demand for both in our real lives.
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