Most societies has its homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree?

In today's

world there

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world, there

are lots of people who

can not

can not

cannot

afford a

house

for themselves. Some people believe that these people could be benefited only by supporting economically.

This

essay will discuss why I completely disagree with

this

proposition because there are alternatives to support

such

people

such

as education, free meals, employment etc. To embark on,

firstly

, the main objective of communities is to provide residence to people who are not capable enough to live in their own

house

ans

in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

and

stays in slum areas. Just providing them fund, might not suffice the purpose of giving them a shelter to live as it is not necessary that these individuals are going to utilise the offered amount for constructing

home

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homes

,

instead

there is

possibility

Suggestion

a possibility

the possibility

of misusing that

money

.

For instance

, some people, in my country, India, people usually do not use the

money

in appropriately,

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

if offered as a help. In

short

Suggestion

shorter

, rather than helping economically, one can get free education and meals as a support.

Moreover

, the reason why only

money

would not be beneficial for poor people,

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

, who do not have their own

house

is that they barely would understand the value of earning, until they do it themselves.

For instance

,

money

offered one time would be limited one,

however

, employment will offer

funds

Suggestion

funding

for

long run

Suggestion

the long run

a long run

long runs

.

Hence

, providing employment

instead

of

money

would give them a better chance to arrange a

house

. To recapitulate,

this

essay discussed why only

money

would

no

negation of a word or group of words

not

be a great help for citizens without home because

this

money

offered might be misused by

such

people and it will be a static for just a certain time period. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the proposition that economic help alone would not be useful

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appropriate to; intended for

for

people who does no have

home

that male; objective male pronoun

him

.