People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effect does it have on an individually and on society?

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Insomnia is becoming a problem, especially for city dwellers. The number of people who experience lack of sleep is increasing in many countries all over the world.

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essay will explain some reasons for that problem and possible impacts on people who are exposed to it themselves and to others. The primary question is why people sleep less?

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, it is because most workers have to meet deadlines every single day.

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, a manager who has just arrived in London after having a twelve hour flight from Jakarta has to prepare a presentation to meet his client in the

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morning. If it happens almost every week, it will ruin his sleep schedule.

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, they have to deal with their family right after they get back home.

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, a working

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has to take care of her baby after office hours so she will not feel as if she is a bad

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, those obligations make people feel nervous and hard for them to directly go to bed even after they have finished their duties at the office.

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, what kind of negative impacts can insomnia have on people and those around them? There are several unpleasant things that can happen.

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and foremost, in an individual scale, it can cause a serious health issue, namely severe insomnia. Having an irregular sleep schedule can ruin our biological clock and it can responsible for hormonal changes in the long run.

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, lack of sleep can have a negative effect on both our personal and professional

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as well. I am certain that there is nobody who likes to interact with a grumpy person all day long. To conclude, I believe people experience insomnia mainly because of work deadlines.

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, it causes so many drawbacks on both personal and professional

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People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effect does it have on an individually and on society?

Your opinion

Some people think young people are not suitable for important position in the government while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on the positions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.

Professionals such as doctors, nurses and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree?

Some people think that success is the best way to measure intelligence. Others believe that it can be measured through other useful parameters. Do you agree or disagree?

Very few schoolchildren learn about the value of money and how to look after it, yet this is a critical life skill that should be taught as part of the school curriculum. Do you agree or disagree?