Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts, and that this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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important, but

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. Some people insist that the

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is wasting

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the arts

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on more useful things. I agree with

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view. For one thing, arts promotions and events can be organized by many other private organizations or society clubs and you do not really need a

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intervention to run the show. There are many clubs

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as Lion’s club or YMCC clubs that can take the initiative and sponsor

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events.

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, a music program or an exhibition of paintings can be organized by a local club and there is no need for the

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to sponsor it. There are

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many rich people who take pleasure in sponsoring art shows and programmes. When the

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does not have to spend

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on arts it can focus on developing core areas like education, healthcare and infrastructure. Poverty, illiteracy and malnutrition are still a major problem in many countries around the world.

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, in India, millions of students still do not go to school.

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, there are numerous homeless people.

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of spending the public funds on

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should try to improve the health of its people. It should ensure that all children are going to school and they have access to good food and potable water. In conclusion, while arts events and programmes are important for the society, they should not be sponsored by the tax

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contributed by people. The

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should focus on more important areas and use its

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for the benefit and upliftment of the human society.