Nowadays many people prefer to shop in supermarket rather than small shops or local markets? Is this positive or negative for development? Discuss and give your opinion.

There is quite an obvious discussion around the topic of shopping.

While

some people believe that mega-stores are unnecessary for people who want to buy any

goods

, I would argue that

this

trend has more benefits and

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for consumers. I will explain my reasons in

this

essay. There is no doubt that most supermarkets provide all

goods

and well-designed layouts.

This

is because the most part of the

goods

are located in the appropriate department, which can make it convenient for customers to find a product.

For example

, in Australia, Coles supermarket can provide all

goods

such

as dairy-free, gluten-free and nut-free in each department that can be easy to find from buyers.

As a result

, that can make all customers less spend time on their shopping

while

they have to go to work or have to look after their kids. It is worth pointing out that mega-stores are necessary for buyers who would like to buy a greater number of products.

This

is based on the fact that shopping in a big supermarket that can

also

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offer a special price to buy all products.

For instance

, Costco Wholesale can provide the price of their

goods

with

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a decent price

while

their membership customers buy a large number of products at that time.

Consequently

, many supermarkets offer special a discount system by encouraging people with membership cards. In conclusion, we can observe that shopping in a big supermarket has a lot of benefits for consumers

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can be a convenient location for

goods

and decent prices.

Overall

, I firmly believe that

this

trend is a positive development.