Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the reasons people do this? Do you think it is a good thing or a bad thing?

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Anti-aging products and several beauty treatments are really popular nowadays. The reason is so many people, especially women in their 30s, avoid

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looking

older. I believe

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trend has both advantages and disadvantages.

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and foremost, who are not afraid of imagining our

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looses its elasticity and

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form wrinkles

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facial areas? As we are getting older, it is certain that our metabolism will get slower. Unfortunately, there is no way for us to stop

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biological process. We just can make an effort to slow down the aging process by several ways.

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, some people do the

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care routine by using

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the products

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and retinoic acid. Those products maintain the

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elasticity and make it look younger.

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one hand, it can be beneficial if we only use the proper treatment suggested by professionals, dermatologists in

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case.

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, there are so many

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cases, people

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care products. They end up trying dangerous surgeries conducted by a non-professional who offers doing procedures with lower price and can give instantaneous result.

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, some women do the

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Botox

injection in an unlicensed beauty salon.

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can ruin their hormone system in the long run or in worst case it can cause a direct fatal effect. To conclude, I believe there is nothing wrong with people want to look younger as long as they follow a proper and healthy procedures. If someone only cares about finding a lower-price treatment without considering its safety, it will cause a problem. So, in my opinion,

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phenomenon has both good and bad impacts depends on how people concern about their safety in the

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place and trust the long-term process

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of craving for something that can provide an instant result.

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