As well making money, Business have some social responsibilities also. Do you agree or disagree ?

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Business profit's a businessman and economy of the nation. While, business
have
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has
some social responsibilities
also
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.
Thus
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, I firmly agree with the statement that despite of, generating money, business
have
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has
social responsibilities
also
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. I would elucidate my stand in the
upsurging
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paragraphs. To embark with, business contributes a part of their profit to
country's economy
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the country's economy
a country's economy
with paying taxes to government. Government Can utilise
this
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collected money for development and maintenance of schools and hospitals.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
that every individual
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their basic needs.
For example
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,
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,
if every person
obtain
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obtains
better education
this
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would
also
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lead to positive development of
nation
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the nation
a nation
nations
.
Furthermore
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,
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,
if corporations would raise there area and more companies will be there
this
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growth in corporations lead to job opportunities for the individual's who are unemployed.
In addition
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to
this
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,
problem
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the problem
problems
of poverty would be eradicated very rapidly and without earning funds, corporations could not be able to complete
there
of them or themselves
their
social responsibilities.
On the other hand
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,
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,
there is a direct influence of factories on the environment, as factories are affecting nature in several ways.
For example
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,
emission
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the emission
of harmful gases in the atmosphere and release of toxic substances or chemicals into water of lakes or rivers cause several harmful diseases and
also
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cause harm to marine life of aquatic animals.
Hence
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, companies have to take care of
environment
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the environment
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also as they are
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as they are also
taking care of
there
of them or themselves
their
profits.
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although
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Although
,
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,
taking care of
environment
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the environment
is
also
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a social responsibility. In conclusion, conclusion
businesse's
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
major aim is to generate more profit. But
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that companies must place
there
of them or themselves
their
social responsibilities at the top most priority.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social responsibilities
  • contribute
  • well-being
  • community
  • philanthropy
  • sustainability
  • ethical
  • trust
  • reputation
  • accountable
  • profit-making
  • balance
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