As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.

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Technological developments, especially computers and internet, have changed our lives substantially in the
last
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three decades. Starting from the introduction of the
first
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desktop computer, through the development of the laptops and smart-phones, and up to the new smart-watches and personal online assistance
such
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as amazon's Alexa, it seems as though the
internat
a computer network consisting of a worldwide network of computer networks that use the TCP/IP network protocols to facilitate data transmission and exchange
internet
and computers have taken over our lives. These
devlopments
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
developments
have
profound impact
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a profound impact
on our
sociaty
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
and the effects can be seen more and more. Many people loose
there
of them or themselves
their
jobs to computerized
machinary
machines or machine systems collectively
machinery
who can perform the required tasks faster and
more accurate
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more accurately
. Classic examples include amazon's computerized storing facilities as well as the motor
industry which
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industry, which
have become
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has become
had become
almost completely hands free. These changes
ocure
come to pass
occur
not only in the industrial field but
effects
the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion
affects
all types of jobs from medicine to
education
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. The effects computers have on
education
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and data
aquisition
the act of contracting or assuming or acquiring possession of something
acquisition
is enormous. Student's can gain
massive amount
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a massive amount
of information in
secoonds
coming next after the first in position in space or time or degree or magnitude
seconds
and there is no limit to the amount of data that can be obtained. These changes have raised
fundumental
serving as an essential component
fundamental
questions in regards to the role of teachers in the
education
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of generations to come. Some believe that the classical teaching paradigm of frontal lectures is
obselet
no longer in use
obsolete
and soon will not be needed.
This
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is because, unlike in past years, all the data is stored online and there is no need to pass information
verbaly
as a verb
verbally
.
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, not only that people do not need oral lectures, they can even learn online how to gain the required information. Despite the increasing use of computers I believe teachers will always be needed.
This
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is because computers will never be able to replace a human touch or gesture. The internet will never be able to replace a smile or a hug and
education
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can not
can not
cannot
rely only on hard facts. True
education
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also include
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also includes
emotional safety and
astbility
the quality or attribute of being firm and steadfast
stability
as well as a
worm
having or producing a comfortable and agreeable degree of heat or imparting or maintaining heat
warm
touch. Computers will become an integral part of formal
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education but
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education, but
will only assist the teachers, not replace them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Digital learning
  • Personalized guidance
  • Blended learning
  • Remote education
  • Emotional intelligence
  • Human interaction
  • Cultural dimension
  • Mentorship
  • Critical thinking
  • Educational technology
  • Learning outcomes
  • Role model
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