Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

Discussion regarding the topic "Usage of
vaccine
for
Suggestion
to
cure
of childhood diseases" is always a
debate
Suggestion
debatable
one. To my knowledge, usage of
vaccine
Suggestion
the vaccine
vaccines
, is either for prevention or
cure
the
disease
. Let’s discuss some of the advantages in the following.
Firstly
, For the former Prevention, vaccination should be given must in order to avoid them for the rest of
life
.
For example
, Polio which should
vaccine
at the early stage of
life
, which may lead to death or leave the child physically challenged. If they become physically challenged,
then
they need to suffer for the rest of their
life
.
Vaccine
for
this
sort of
disease
are
must
Suggestion
musts
, for the betterment of
entire
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the entire life
an entire life
life
. For the
later
referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)
latter
point, immunize the children in order not get it once more in a lifetime.
For Example
, Chicken pox is the one which will show up at the early stage of childhood, may be
below
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under
five years. Vaccination for these should be must as a
cure
.
Its
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It's
not considered as
deadly
Suggestion
dead
, Nowadays, but when we consider the past lot of lives are lost because of it. Considering the other side of the coin, continues usage of
vaccine
Suggestion
the vaccine
vaccines
may hamper the development of natural immune system. Some of the kids are dependent on medicine as
natural immune system
Suggestion
a natural immune system
was damaged because of
medicine
Suggestion
the medicine
. They should depend on the
vaccine
through out
all the way through
throughout
their
life
and sometimes it may lead to
situation
Suggestion
a situation
the situation
situations
, where usage of them will not
cure
the
disease
. In conclusion, Usage of immune for the
disease
is good for
life
, if it was not a habitat
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