Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Environmental problems like
pollution
in
this
world is taking
new upper
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the new upper limit
limit
and getting
worsen
(comparative of 'bad') inferior to another in quality or condition or desirability
worse
day by day. Some individuals believe that the most effective way to deal with worldwide ecological difficulties is to raise the
price
of fuel.
However
, I am of the opinion that it will benefit the society to some extent only, which will be discussed in the following paragraphs. Increase in
price
of fuel will
limit
the personal
transport
of an individual to some levels and commuters will find other alternatives to travel on daily
basic
a relation that provides the foundation for something
basis
such
as public
transport
or electric vehicles. Majorly the middle class families will be
effected
acted upon; influenced
affected
with
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by
this
step and persuade them to follow
local city
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the local city transport
transport
in the sake of controlling
pollution
. Recently, in Delhi, the government took initiatives to control the personal vehicle on road by charging
double amount
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a double amount
the double amount
on
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of
petrol purchase for own carriers,
thus
the output was quite effective and
number
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the number
of vehicles drop down approximately 80 percent from the service roads.
However
,
on the other hand
, the major contributors of
air
pollution
are the
airplanes
. In that case lowering the
price
will not impact much as
air
travelling is carried by mostly rich people and it is part of
luxury
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the luxury
a luxury
. People who prefer travelling by
air
as
compare
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compared
to road are always keeping the time
limit
as
priority
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a priority
instead
of money.
Hence
, increasing
price
will not lower the usage of
air
transport
.
Thus
, we need to look for an alternative solution to minimize the
pollution
hazard. In conclusion,
increasing
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the increasing price
price
of fuel will profit the community in terms of limiting usage of personal conveyance, but for some who choose time as the
limit
instead
of money will not be
effected
acted upon; influenced
affected
with
Suggestion
by
this
idea.
Consequently
, I believe inflation in
price
will not resolve the ecological problems.
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  • affordability
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