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TOPIC : Advertising discourages us from being individuals by making us all look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#topic #individuals #look
Our
individuality gets
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individuality, gets
 lost and we belong to the same platform as judged by the world of adverts. I totally agree
to
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with
this
 viewpoint that advertising fails to encourage us in taking our own decisions and thereby loses the originality. The world of adverts is very tempting and people get attracted towards the new upcoming products launched by the marketing companies. Any new product in the beginning is sold at a lower price so that
public
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the public
 can buy it without knowing the product entirely.
Similarly
, any excess products which did not make major profits in the market
,
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,
 always come with mouthwatering discount offers. These are all set to be deceptive to the consumers and all people look alike with the loss of their individuality and the idea of critical thinking. The advertising media
has engulfed
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have engulfed
 the entire population with their marketing
strategies spreading
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strategies, spreading
 at a faster speed than common men are capable of thinking.
Moreover
, the advert videos shown
in
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on
 television have celebrities like
sportstars
someone who is dazzlingly skilled in any field
superstars
 or actors featuring in it. When superstars can be easily fooled by the allowances given by the companies
,
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,
 there is no doubt that
general public
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the general public
 will follow their footsteps as they are thought to be the role models in their lives. We all are
then
 categorized to a common platform and lose our identity in seeking the correct product. The greed for money may be one of the root causes behind
this
 mentality and somehow
paralyzes
loss of the ability to move a body part
paralyses
 our analytical minds. The advertising media
has successfully managed
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have successfully managed
 to cripple mankind with their enormous business tactics
that undoubtedly
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that, undoubtedly
, has made us lose our identity and genuineness. To conclude, the advertising world has not motivated us in any aspects and people now lie at the same level. I strongly support
this
 idea, since marketing companies have taken control over the minds of the people with their
business strategic
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business, strategic
business strategy
business strategies
 policies which has jeopardized our thinking capability and thereby loss of originality.
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