As the number of private cars has increased, so too has the level of pollution in many cities. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem?
Owing to the significant rise in the number of the private cars, the
air
pollution
has increased too.There are some solutions which should be implemented to reduce the effect of the ari
a mixture of gases (especially oxygen) required for breathing; the stuff that the wind consists of
air
pollution
.
Firstly
.Using private cars can be the main reason of the problem.By using other transportations method
we can control Suggestion
the other transportation method
other transportation method
other transportation methods
the the
spread of the definite article
the
ari
a mixture of gases (especially oxygen) required for breathing; the stuff that the wind consists of
air
pollution
.For example
, the government
need to impose the puplice
transport as the the force of policemen and officers
police
first
option for transfer.All countries need to start using buss
and trains rather than private cars.Some a vehicle carrying many passengers; used for public transport
buses
busses
bus
countrise
who a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
already start
to use Suggestion
have already started
are already starting
this
solution has become safer in terms of the air
pollutions than other countries who has not done any thing
to solve an indefinite thing
anything
theis
denotes a person or thing
this
these
proplem
.
Another a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problem
problems
considrebale
solution is, that the large or relatively large in number or amount or extent or degree
considerable
government
need to rise
the tax on these cars.raise the level or amount of something
raise
the
gas that used in these cars which is Suggestion
The
aq
major cause of the indefinite article, "an" is use before a vowel sound, "a" otherwise
a
air
pollution
have to be more expensive. By using the tax money the government
can provied
other environmentally friendly transportations ways.give something useful or necessary to
provide
For instance
, puplic
transport can be a good alternative of cars.not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole
public
This
possible solustion
can a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solution
halp
to reduce the damage that caused by the give help or assistance; be of service
help
hope
helps
air
pollution
.
In conclusion. This
issue is a serious threat to eveyone
. all people
everyone
Tthis
problem can be Suggestion
This
affectivly
solved if both the population and the in an effective manner
effectively
government
worked togther
and start with the given solutions.in contact with each other or in proximity
together
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite