As the number of private cars has increased, so too has the level of pollution in many cities. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem?

Owing to the significant rise in the number of the private cars, the
air
pollution
has increased too.There are some solutions which should be implemented to reduce the effect of the
ari
a mixture of gases (especially oxygen) required for breathing; the stuff that the wind consists of
air
pollution
.
Firstly
.Using private cars can be the main reason of the problem.By using
other transportations method
Suggestion
the other transportation method
other transportation method
other transportation methods
we can control
the the
definite article
the
spread of the
ari
a mixture of gases (especially oxygen) required for breathing; the stuff that the wind consists of
air
pollution
.
For example
, the
government
need to impose the
puplice
the force of policemen and officers
police
transport as the
first
option for transfer.All countries need to start using
buss
a vehicle carrying many passengers; used for public transport
buses
busses
bus
and trains rather than private cars.Some
countrise
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
who
already start
Suggestion
have already started
are already starting
to use
this
solution has become safer in terms of the
air
pollutions than other countries who has not done
any thing
an indefinite thing
anything
to solve
theis
denotes a person or thing
this
these
proplem
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problem
problems
. Another
considrebale
large or relatively large in number or amount or extent or degree
considerable
solution is, that the
government
need to
rise
raise the level or amount of something
raise
the tax on these cars.
the
Suggestion
The
gas that used in these cars which is
aq
indefinite article, "an" is use before a vowel sound, "a" otherwise
a
major cause of the
air
pollution
have to be more expensive. By using the tax money the
government
can
provied
give something useful or necessary to
provide
other environmentally friendly transportations ways.
For instance
,
puplic
not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole
public
transport can be a good alternative of cars.
This
possible
solustion
a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solution
can
halp
give help or assistance; be of service
help
hope
helps
to reduce the damage that caused by the
air
pollution
. In conclusion.
This
issue is a serious threat to
eveyone
all people
everyone
.
Tthis
Suggestion
This
problem can be
affectivly
in an effective manner
effectively
solved if both the population and the
government
worked
togther
in contact with each other or in proximity
together
and start with the given solutions.
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