Nowadays the way many people interact why each other has changed because of technology In what ways has technology affected the types of relation ship people make Has this become a positive or negative development?
It's evident that technology has brought a
revoloutionary
change in means of markedly new or introducing radical change
revolutionary
intraction
.a mutual or reciprocal action; interacting
interaction
in traction
instruction
introduction
now
Suggestion
Now
,
people are much more connected than Accept space
,
everbefore
.Suggestion
ever before
it
makes no Suggestion
It
diffrence
that it's an office work or the quality of being unlike or dissimilar
difference
a
informal Suggestion
an
meeting you
can observe the impact of modern gadgets everywhere.Accept comma addition
meeting, you
there
have created more strongestSuggestion
There
,
fastest and easiest Accept space
,
rlations
mutual dealings or connections or communications among persons or groups
relations
,
Accept space
,
thus
we strongly emphasis
that it's a productive contribution in mankind lifestyle.
Suggestion
emphasize
Nodoubt
Suggestion
No doubt
,
modern technology has changed the world into a "global hut".
When we glance at few decades backAccept space
,
,
we realized that people had fewer methods to contact with Accept space
,
thier
friends and relatives living at of them or themselves
their
distance
.Suggestion
a distance
for
Suggestion
For
example writting
Accept comma addition
example, writing
example writing
latters
and sending telegrams were only two the literary culture
letters
mathods
.a way of doing something, especially a systematic way; implies an orderly logical arrangement (usually in steps)
methods
but
, these were time consuming as well as less secure means.Suggestion
But
thus
, people didn't prefer to go far for study and even for wedding and Suggestion
Thus
bussines
purpose. When it's come to presenta commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
,
we have Accept space
,
every thing
just in one click.all things
everything
to
be more obvious, we have portable devices with thousands and thousands of applications.Suggestion
To
why
we should not thankful Suggestion
Why
to
our blockbuster modern inventionSuggestion
for
??
Accept space
??
it
has made our interaction well -Suggestion
It
approched
.move towards
approached
now
sending a formal massage or watching your friends are not a big dealSuggestion
Now
.
Accept space
.
we
have many apps, by using them we can watch Suggestion
We
ourbeloved
one live. Here Suggestion
our beloved
i
will give my own examplerefers to the speaker or writer
I
,
my husband is living in Accept space
,
affrica but
Accept comma addition
Africa, but
Africa but
thanx
because of an acknowledgment of appreciation
thanks
tanks
than
skyp
and Suggestion
the sky
sky
whatsapp
he cannot miss even single previous moment
in PakistanSuggestion
a single precious moment
a single previous moment
.
Accept space
.
see
, how reliable and faster source we have now a days.
As mentioned aboveperceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight
See
,
Accept space
,
modren
technology has boosted our life style.belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
Modern
therefore
, I Suggestion
Therefore
stongly
believe that it is a blessing of God with strength or in a strong manner
strongly
on
mankind.Suggestion
to
for
that
is participating so productively in developing as well as maintaining our relationsSuggestion
That
Submitted by Serhii Baraniuk on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.