Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

Ecosystem generally known as the combination of all living beings on earth. Humans
plays
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play
have been playing
an important role in
ecosystem
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the ecosystem
ecosystems
. Because of us for past few decades, we are creating an imbalance in it, which leads to
exitinction
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the extinction
extinction
of other creatures. There are many reasons out of which we will discuss few important of them. Primary cause are Pollution, improper waste disposal process,
deforestration
the state of being clear of trees
deforestation
. Lets discuss pollution, because of
it through
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it, through
varies
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varied
varying
means like air
,
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,
water and sound, which is questioning the sustainability of other creatures. They are caused by industrial gases, vehicle emissions, factory waste dump in
sea
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the sea
, sounds from other devices, has not only effected creatures that
are depend
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depend
are depending
on
sea
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the sea
but
also
flying. Reduction of forest caused disappear of lots of wild animals.
This
was done for expansion of living and employment. Due to redirect outcome of factories into marine waters caused
huge impact
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a huge impact
on Aqua life and merely created their life in question.
Solution
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The solution
A solution
can be a
lot but
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lot, but
few of them are discussed below. Some of the important solutions are discussed here, that can restore the balance. Most important one is tracking of wastage from industries and taking necessary actions if they are not following the standards framed by the
governement
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
governments
and ecologist. The species that are at the edge of
extinct
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extinction
, should be taken special care to increase their population. Planting as many trees as
possible which
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possible, which
helps in restoration of forest area. Maintain
seperate
act as a barrier between; stand between
separate
nests for birds in order to make
sustainbility
the property of being sustainable
sustainability
of birds. Organisation of waste
maintanance
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
through
recycling process
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the recycling process
, that can be recycled. Creating an awareness in
general public
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the general public
and imposing serious restrictions on the activities that are
aganist
in contact with
against
to
eco
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Eco
friendly. In Conclusion, Everyone should feel responsible to make our living space friendly to all other beings. If we neglect now there may be chances of question of our
existance
the state or fact of existing
existence
. As soon as better we should keep
restoration process
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the restoration process
in order to retain valuable species from
extinct
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extinction
.
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  • habitat destruction
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • overexploitation
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • invasive species
  • conservation
  • sustainable practices
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • ecosystems
  • species population
  • genetic diversity
  • environmental awareness
  • protected areas
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