Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

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Ecosystem generally known as the combination of all living beings on earth. Humans

plays

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play

have been playing

an important role in

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

ecosystems

. Because of us for past few decades, we are creating an imbalance in it, which leads to

exitinction

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the extinction

extinction

of other creatures. There are many reasons out of which we will discuss few important of them. Primary cause are Pollution, improper waste disposal process,

deforestration

the state of being clear of trees

deforestation

. Lets discuss pollution, because of

it through

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it, through

varies

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varied

varying

means like air

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water and sound, which is questioning the sustainability of other creatures. They are caused by industrial gases, vehicle emissions, factory waste dump in

sea

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the sea

, sounds from other devices, has not only effected creatures that

are depend

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depend

are depending

sea

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the sea

but

also

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flying. Reduction of forest caused disappear of lots of wild animals.

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was done for expansion of living and employment. Due to redirect outcome of factories into marine waters caused

huge impact

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a huge impact

on Aqua life and merely created their life in question.

Solution

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The solution

A solution

can be a

lot but

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lot, but

few of them are discussed below. Some of the important solutions are discussed here, that can restore the balance. Most important one is tracking of wastage from industries and taking necessary actions if they are not following the standards framed by the

governement

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

governments

and ecologist. The species that are at the edge of

extinct

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extinction

, should be taken special care to increase their population. Planting as many trees as

possible which

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possible, which

helps in restoration of forest area. Maintain

seperate

act as a barrier between; stand between

separate

nests for birds in order to make

sustainbility

the property of being sustainable

sustainability

of birds. Organisation of waste

maintanance

activity involved in maintaining something in good working order

maintenance

through

recycling process

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the recycling process

, that can be recycled. Creating an awareness in

general public

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the general public

and imposing serious restrictions on the activities that are

aganist

in contact with

against

eco

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Eco

friendly. In Conclusion, Everyone should feel responsible to make our living space friendly to all other beings. If we neglect now there may be chances of question of our

existance

the state or fact of existing

existence

. As soon as better we should keep

restoration process

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the restoration process

in order to retain valuable species from

extinct

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extinction

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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Topic Vocabulary:

habitat destruction
deforestation
urbanization
overexploitation
climate change
pollution
invasive species
conservation
sustainable practices
greenhouse gas emissions
ecosystems
species population
genetic diversity
environmental awareness
protected areas

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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

Fully explain your ideas

More and more tasks we do at home and at work these days are by robots. Is this a positive or negative trend?

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In many countries schools have severe problems with students behaviour.What are the causes and possile solutions for this problem.

In many parts of the world, women study science and technology, but donot work in these fields. What measures can be taken to encourage women to work in science and technology?

Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gyms and sports club, believing this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so.