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Essay topics: In many western countries there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children?

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Now a day’s it’s becoming normal in western society to have no children, despite from western country, even though many couples even in Asian countries start planning to not have children’s. Well’ it all depends on the circumstances and their future planning’s in their
life
. They might consider spending their precious period of time with each other’s at the start. In my experience I know one of my colleague living in California, once he said’ they don’t have plans for children at
this
 stage, they reason he quoted’ he is not stable financially to manage his
life
 with current income resources. So I guess it varies in different situations to decide for children’s. In my opinion, it is significantly important to have children’s to start your
life
 in real manners.
Firstly
, our priorities will be changed, and we’ll
then
 actually know that’ how our parents have spent their sleepless nights with us, to make us comfortable in our childhood. We’ll be more determined and focused in professional
life
, to provide quality of
life
 for our children’s. I think having no children’s will make the couple’s
life
 frustrated, after sometime when there will be no changes in
life
.
Secondly it
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Secondly, it
 humans demand to always expect something different after a certain period of time. The home environment will be cherished with the children’s and we will feel the happiness of
life
. Eventually, in my conclusions, it's mandatory to have children’s in
couple’s
Suggestion
a couple’s life
life
 at least one. As well they should spend their maximum efforts to make them a good person in society to serve for their country. And everyone should take responsibility at least for the one children growth.
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