By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder.Therfore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers
Passing a death judgement on an individual connected to murder
also
interpret
the Correct subject-verb agreement
interprets
community
to be guilty of same
, Hitherto spending the remaining of their lives in Correct article usage
the same
prison
is a better castigation for their offence
. It is considered by the
society that manslaughter is a punishable and huge Correct article usage
apply
offence
therefore
it should be approached by the law with all strictness. To start with,murder on the law varies with community
,religion and countries
.Fix the agreement mistake
country
To
Correct your spelling
It
have
been believed by some that anyone who kills should be killed but Correct subject-verb agreement
has
life
in prison
for some others. Remanding a prisoner in prison
for life
will however
be a better option on the note that their freedom will be taken away,room for repentance may be achieved and working on their conscience and psyche will be made available For example
,A man who killed his wife on infidelity ground if murdered for his offence
might not know what it means to be a widower without freedom and the gravity of his offence
coupled with
the shame to face his wife family and much more toture
if there are children involved in the marriage.With all Correct your spelling
torture
these
there is Add a comma
these,
chance
to make things right if kept alive. Add an article
a chance
the chance
Furthermore
, staying all their life
in prison
will serve the community
by making them do hard labour jobs For example
,their manpower is needed in construction
of roads and bridges without monetary value.They can Add an article
the construction
also
be made to clean parks, stadium or any location where outdoors
activities Replace the word
outdoor
takes
place. Change the verb form
take
In addition
,there are benefits for this
inmates too as vocational training can be learnt,Correct determiner usage
these
exams
can be written so as to make sure they ain't idle which could lead to Correct word choice
and exams
depressive
state of mind and Add an article
a depressive
some times
suicidal thoughts Correct your spelling
sometimes
However
, passing a death penalty will give the bereaved a sense of revenge and sometimes satisfaction. For example
,a mother whose child's life
was terminated by his classmates will not mind the murderer
mother going through Change noun form
murderer's
same
not minding living through the guilt In conclusion,the Correct article usage
the same
community
will be addressed
a murderer if killing as a punishment is Wrong verb form
address
adapted
.Better still,letting a person guilty of Correct your spelling
adopted
such
offence
Correct article usage
an offence
to
remain forever in Fix the infinitive
apply
prison
is a better option and sometimes benefits to
Change preposition
apply
the
society when used as manpowerCorrect article usage
apply
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
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