Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, Electronic gadgets became part and parcel of life. I agree to the statement, that they have
negative impact
on the kids rather than positive. Lets discuss in detail about them in Suggestion
a negative impact
later part
.
As the technology has gone to Suggestion
later parts
the later part
a later part
such
an extent, without usage of laptop's
, we are unable to proceed most of the thing's in our daily activities. It not only has Suggestion
laptops
laptop
effect
on major's but Suggestion
an effect
also
the minor's. Almost all the children are adicted
and it became their routine pass time. In the present situation, as most of the parent's are working, they have enough money and less time for their kids. So in order to make them busy, they taught them how to use computer's, so that they will be busy with them. compulsively or physiologically dependent on something habit-forming
addicted
For example
, video games are one of them. Child
who spend most of their day with these games, tend to lose their grade's in education.
Apart from the above, it Suggestion
A child
The child
also effect
their mental and physical growth. Suggestion
also affects
also affect
For example
, the person who play's outdoor game like football, volleyball, tennis, squash, baseball tend to have more physical growth than the one who was with computer gaming. Those who are well maintaining
their body, tend to psychologically strong. Not only Suggestion
maintained
this
, but also
pron
sites which makes minor take wrong path.
In conclusion, having a tendency (to); often used in combination
prone
Instead
of using these type of tool's, we should make yong generation
to go out and play external games. Not only they can excel in their education, but Suggestion
the young generation
young generation
ion generation
in generation
also
posses well built body
. Suggestion
a well built body
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite