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Some school work or travel for a period of time instead of going directly to the university.what are the advantages and disadvantages?

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The
gap
year
 is a
year
 after high
school which
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school, which
 students use to explore their various
interest
Suggestion
interests
. Some may prefer to work while others travel to various places. After the
gap
year
 the student
may decides
Suggestion
may decide
 to go on with their career. Merits and demerit of
gap
year
 will be discussed. Many students usually work within
this
 period of
time
 so as to raise money to
further
 their education as high
school
 is known to be so
expensive and
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expensive, and
this
 helps to raise
financial burden
Suggestion
the financial burden
off
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of
 their parents shoulder.
Also
, it gives students
time
 to introspect and consider fields they might have never had interest to study before now.
Furthermore
, as many would prefer to work others may wish to travel to different parts of the world and explore new things
,
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,
learn different cultures and Languages
,
Accept space
,
meet people and
also
 make friends.
This
 gives them a better idea of the outside world and improves their personality.
In addition
, activities done during the
gap
year
 can be added to the students resume to boast it for more jobs after
school
 or part
time
 jobs while schooling. As every garden has weeds
,
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,
similarly
,
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,
the
gap
year
also
 has its downside. The student may not like to continue studying when he starts making a lot of money.
Secondly
,
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 and touring at
this
 stage may bring unnecessary exposure to certain things that might be of negative influences to the young
school
 leaver.
Finally
,
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,
one
year
 is too long to stay out of
school
.
Therefore
, so many
student
Suggestion
students
 find it so hard to catch up with studies and homeworks after
this
 period. In summary, students should
endavour
a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)
endeavour
 to use their
time
 wisely during the
gap
year
 as it has a lot of advantages.
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