Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is believed by some individuals that big establishments and the government are the only ones who can influence the society to be better and not the citizens of
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country. In my opinion, I totally disagree with
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idea because the people
own
located at or attached to
on
the environment, they live and work there, so it is their
responsiblitity
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
to either make or mar their environment.
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, a community comprises of individuals living or working together,
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, the responsibility of caring for the place lies on them.
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, adopting simple
attribute
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attributes
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as avoiding dumping of refuse inappropriately or preventing the emission of air pollutants from car engines and domestic fumes will contribute to the overall maintenance of the surrounding.
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, Malaysia became one of the neatest countries worldwide because every home was mandated to have
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a minimum
of 2 garbage bin and every of the street corners within the city was
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provided with refuse bin.
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, the earlier the
indigienes
originating where it is found
indigenous
stand up
o
in the direction of
to
of
of of
on
their
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
responsibilities
, the better for them.
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, little drops of water
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make
an ocean. In essence, if everyone constantly imbibe an attitude of cleanliness constantly, it will
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culminate in
culminate into
having an enviable society.
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, it is a rule in my community that every household must be involved in weekly sanitation in the neighbourhood and
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simple practice has paid off for us due to the fact that in the
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5 years, there has been no need for the authorities to repair or replace anything. In conclusion, waiting for the government of large companies to make a difference in a geographical location is synonymous to laziness on the part of the dwellers.
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, maintenance of a locality should be done by the locals themselves.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • waste reduction
  • conservation
  • ecosystem
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • responsibility
  • leadership
  • legislation
  • investment
  • collaboration
  • systemic change
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