Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, Abortion means not removing the baby before they are born. They have been
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on, whether
it should be legalised or not. Lets discuss in detail regarding the same in the latter part. Regarding making Abort legal. Before going to discuss it, let's check out the reasons for it. One of them may be because of poverty.
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of the parent's don't want to have kids, as they are not in a position to grow them.
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could be, already they had children. In
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case, it will difficult for either mother or father to take of their kids, if they have more than
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a couple
the couple
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, If a family already had 2 little ones,
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may be difficult for them to raise, so because of
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reason they want to go it. One more could be on medical grounds. If the mother became sick after the
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she could not have the other, as it may be dangerous to either mother or born child. Considering the above points, we can support for making it legal. Lets discuss about
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the other side
of the coin. Recent generation, because of
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a foolish and usually extravagant passion or love or admiration
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infestation
infestations
and knowing that they can go for abortion, they are having free sex at early stages.
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, Many news published in internet or newspaper, regarding minor getting
pregancy
the state of being pregnant; the period from conception to birth when a woman carries a developing fetus in her uterus
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. In
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situation, if they go for it, it may be risk
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of
life.
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risky
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chances of getting
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carrying developing offspring within the body or being about to produce new life
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the future
may be questionable. In conclusion, to my opinion, under some
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with doctors permission and proper legal approval, it can be done. If
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